Le fabuleux destin d’Raymond Hawes

-On July 23rd, 2009  12:53 am and 32 sec.
blue fly of the Calliphorides species,
whose wings can flutter   14670  times per minute
landed in Saint-Vincent Street, Montmartre.
At the exact same second, outside a restaurant,
the wind was sweeping in under a tablecloth,
causing the glasses to dance without anybody noticing it.
At the same time, on the fifth floor of avenue Trudaine,
Eugène Koler, erased the name of his best friend, Émile Maginot,
in his adress-book after coming home from his funeral.
And in this exact moment, a man grows tired of searching.
For god's sake, Ms. Poulain, come find me.
Published in: Writing 12 on July 26, 2009 at2:51 am Comments (0)

He Fell Through The Roof a Few Days Ago…

You are become death,
the destroyer of worlds.
A minstrel of time,
the sower of death-seed,
sought at the moment of birth.
But ideas don’t die,
they are crushed and torn; digested
and regurgitated in to some miserable biproduct.

I need me a new sun;
something to give life to my days.
My sun has set,
and only teases me with distant stars.
She has found another cold rock
to make its lover.

My skies are dark but the air is warm,
it still clings to rays I am learning to live without.
You may now be a distant star,
but you’re the brightest god damned star I’ve ever seen.

I was willing to give you a promise
because promises don’t quit.
But your heart quit.
So I fucking quit.

Published in: Writing 12 on July 20, 2009 at2:04 am Comments (0)

Sandsprite

You are a sandsprite,
fluid and subtle; ageless.
You reflect time eternal
lost within your own iteration.

In another time, you were an ocean,
and now…
now you are a desert, endless.
I kneel down to clutch a palm full of sand.
I draw it in close to my heart, before pouring it
from hand to hand
weighing and reweighing it
until every last grain has fallen through my fingers.
I search for what I have lost,
but it is no more.
There is only the desert, and I will never again find the grains I once held.

Your are beauty, incarnate…
in a stark, barren and indomitable kind of way.
I am lost within you,
and within
I have lost myself.

You are a woodsprite.
You are a sandsprite.
You are a gathering storm,
you’ve run in to life,
and left my in a miserable squabble with my own insufficiency.
You’ve run away from me.

Published in: Writing 12 on July 17, 2009 at12:52 am Comments (0)

Woodsprite

You are a woodsprite.
Slight and agile, cunning and quick.
You emerge from the thicket when summoned,
and are rarely glimpsed between.
Like soft mist in the mountains,
your guile is precise.
With a smile of utter innocence and wonder
and eyes that arouse the feral spirit.
You are a spriggan, a nymph.

You are honest like a massage.
While you rub your eyes,
I spare a perverted glance.
You are one with the river,
an ancient wraith, though renewed
through the spiraling iteration
of all that is pure.

You are a gathering storm,
and you are running in to life
and away from me.

Published in: Writing 12 on June 22, 2009 at8:34 pm Comments (0)

Review of “At the Head of the Woods”

It is albums like this that makes being a reviewer very difficult. How does one decide what has more merit, my own personal opinion, or the necessary information for someone to form their own? It’s a difficult question to answer, but in the end you find that it’s a gentle mixture of both.
                When I first put on At the Head of the Wood’s album “Secrets Beyond Time and Space” I didn’t quite know what to think of it. The atmosphere was rich, all the tones were full-bodied, and the performance was very sharp. But as the tracks dragged on, I found myself limited in my entertainment. The spacey, wah-ing guitars over droning ambient tracks (keyboard, or organ?) and the occasional vocal gems all worked very well together, but it was something about it that put me off.
                Then I realized what it was! After recognizing the huge Pink Floyd influence in the music, I made the connection that had been escaping me. You see, my father used to run a touring Pink Floyd tribute group in Kanada, called “All in All.” To prepare for gigs, he’d listen to Pink Floyd on a twenty-four-seven schedule to drill every last note of every single song in to his head. After a couple months of this, I lost the ability to ever listen to Pink Floyd on my own time. I find this album to be very much the same. The composition is wonderful, the recording is flawlessly done, and the songs all follow the coherent thought, but it is not something I could put on for my own sake. And that is what makes reviewing this album so difficult.
                So I suppose that all I can say in conclusion is that this is a good record that didn’t appeal to my taste. However, I’d have to say that the third movement was my favourite on the disc. If you’re a fan of very mellow, trance music with enough musical substance to keep you interested, then pick this up. Or maybe, if you’re a fan of early and 80’s era Pink Floyd, this would also be of interest to you. Great record, James Woodhead, but I am sad to say that it didn’t tickle my personal fancy.

Published in: Writing 12 on June 16, 2009 at1:09 pm Comments (0)

Magnets (upon which we scribble.)

My mind is no longer a scribble. The scribbles have receded to the back, where in perspective they simply appear as dark shading. My mind is a magnet. It seeks thoughts of impurity and shame. These thoughts are born of discontent, frustration and a corroding weakness in achieving what I truly want, and convince myself in to believing that I require. Ashes against the grain. I rip my mind out of its oppressive skull. The tendons and muscles stretch and start to fray, groaning until they snap. It is from this new perspective that I lie. I lie to myself and others. Weakling. I fabricate false worlds through situational truths to appease those within them, while my mind struggles to maintain the façade. None of it is real. It is all dead as dreams, rotting away in the chasms of the mind’s eye. The magnet corrects my equilibrium, and draws it back to truth; stark, vile. From a sallow and putrid spawning vat of mental being, I am pure.

Published in: Writing 12 on June 12, 2009 at11:40 am Comments (1)

Rough ritual story.

It was dark. Very dark. The entire clan had gathered around the empty field, the blackness engulfing each figure. They gathered on the night of Litha, when the night was shortest. Clouds obscured the moon and stars completely, making the space opaque, devoid of all light. The ritual was to begin any second.
A drone crept it’s way out of the throats of those standing amongst instruments of all sorts. A baritone note rang out eternally, half the men trading their voices with the other half when they got tired to create an endless noise. Two figures emerged from the blackness, each carrying a beeswax candle in front of them; the only light. It illuminated the figures, clad in robes as black as the deep clouds above. They wore ritual masks, carved of wood and adorned with bone. One mask portrayed an expression of deepest anguish, the mouth twisted in to a horrendous crescent. The eyes were narrow with massive ridges above them, stained a deep green. The other mask was carved in to a face of wide-eyed rage, the brow heavily slanting inwards, strained red. Together, the figures sauntered forwards.
Behind the two men, Shaamans, was a wall of driftwood, hundreds of pieces, along with various hides and ritual items. The hides were scorched with eldest Sunwheels of all varieties, and ravens taking flight.
A guitar started to pluck a simple melody, slow and deliberate. The audience drifted in to a deep trance and the masked figures walked through the crowd with the delicious smelling candles. The two figures returned to the front of the audience, between them and the musicians. The vocal drone continued and the string melody picked up, crawling quicker now. The Shaamans set up a ritual circle, staining the ground with white clays. They lined the circle with candles and incense and began to assemble the drift wood. Together, in a precise dance of arms, they built a mountain between them out of the driftwood, stacking it with flawless choreography.
Skin drums joined the music, driving a dark rhythm, as another guitar joined as well. The aesthetic grew darker and the Shaamans built the tower wider, higher, denser. The mountain grew with the music. The two were a force of creation and wonder. They both paused, almost instinctively. They looked at one another and removed the dark robes to reveal a simple garb of hides. They fell from the shoulder to the waste, proceeded by a simple skirt. They continued to build the mountain of driftwood as the music grew darker, heavier, faster.
They moved away from the growing monolith, now nearly as tall as the two men, and walked a spry circle, weaving amongst the candles. Occasionally, the men would dip down, briefly squatting, scorching the clothing that covered them. Small fires erupted, but the two performers cared not. The grass was growing damp in the cool night air. Far in the distance, so far it was nearly missed, thunder clapped, stumbling across the land. The two men made their way to a central hearth and equipped themselves with a drill and bow. There, they made fire. With archaic patience, they built the friction of wood in to a coal, a coal in to a smolder, a smolder in to flame, and the flame in to many. They two men were bringers of light.
They returned to the driftwood monolith and stacked the final pieces on. It was now as tall as each of the men. They removed their masks to reveal long, very long hair, both on their head and their faces. It was matted in to chunks, strips, tendrils. The two men placed the ritual masks upon the upper sides of the driftwood mountain, opposite to one another. The music had built to an astounding density and the two Shaamans started to scream. They rehearsed ancient verse in a guttural shriek, rattling and tearing their throats. The people droned, the drums pounded and the guitars weaved a dark spell.
In the peak of creation, the monolith stood at its full height, all candles were alight and a fire raged inteh central hearth. But the drums slowed, the guitars died out, and the drone quieted to a low hum. The audience was lulled in to complete, introspective relaxation. The two Shaamans removed their garb until they stood only in limp loincloths covering their genitals. An eerie calm came over the audience. They lowered themselves, down, down. The fell closer and closer to the earth, until they lay, fetal, in the grass. The drumming stopped, the hums silenced. It was like the calm before a storm. The only movement was the flickering candles, the only noise the crack of the central hearth’s blaze.
In an instantaneous attack, the drummers began to beat with the ferocious intensity of a thousand thundering hooves. The guitars blazed with reckless abandon, creating a melody beneath the chaos that was nearly missed by the listeners. The Shaamans leaped up from the earth, now naked, and ran screaming in to the crowd. They tackled and grabbed the audience, trashing them around. They jumped and span, exploding from the spirit; exploding from the animal within. They returned to the front and tore the monolith apart like a tornado ripping through the forest, snapping the wood and throwing it down. In awe-inspired terror, the audience watched. The two men rolled and stomped through the splintered wood, wounding themselves as they embodied a vicious force of destruction. They ran a quick circle, and all the candles were extinguished. The central hearth was scattered and went dark. The two ritual performers disappeared. The air was completely still, the scent of beeswax and incense lingering languidly.
The audience was left stunned, unmoving. They waited, unsure of what to expect next. They expected anything and nothing. Unexpectedly, a candle was lit right under their noses, revealing the two men once more. The guitar plucked the same, steady melody that it had at the beginning of the performance. They stood tall, their naked statures primitive and pure. Both were painted gray with various muds and soils. One grabbed a clay urn and poured upon himself a deep, reddish-black liquid and painted himself with it until he all but disappeared. The other then picked up an identical urn and poured upon himself a white paste, covering himself. Light and dark, creation and destruction, now stood naked before the clan. They took the single candle between them, each holding it with a single hand. They raised it above themselves as high as their arms would reach. They stood, staring at the flame. After a few anxious minutes, they lowered it between their contrasting bodies. The guitar slowed, quieted, dwindled. The flame was extinguished, as if by magic. All was dark, all was still. Thunder clapped for a second time, this time closer. The ritual of spiraling iteration had concluded.

Published in: Writing 12 on May 6, 2009 at5:10 pm Comments (1)

Just terrible…

“Yes, I’d consider myself a cunning linguist.”

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Narrative

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A post as you have never seen before…

I once had a bird named Enza.

I opened the window, and Influenze.

Published in: Writing 12 on April 30, 2009 at12:53 pm Comments (1)